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Its my dragon once more this time also climbing... Maybe they don't know they have wings... :)

about 4 hours to get to this stage, still a lot of work to do on the background but I think as a image to works

Any comments and adivce welcome as always.

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:iconserpentscorch3422:
Great work of art. Truly it is. But, as with any picture, there are areas that could be improved upon:)
First of all, the extended arm reaching up to the sun seems wonky and a bit too thin at the shoulder, and the elbow muscles could be thinner. I truly admire the job you did on the scales. It takes a lot of patience, I know. The claw shapes could also be improved on, but I love his pose.^^ And maybe add a little more folds in the wings next time, kay?;)
As a last little tip, the leaves could be more "leaf-shaped", unless it is an imagined species of tree.
All in all, GREAT work, and keep it up! Hope this helps^^
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:iconignitus1992:
This is a very nice piece :nod:

The points where you could improve have pretty much already been stated; the outstretched arm looks a bit thin from the elbow to the shoulder, and the leaves should be more leaf-like. Other than that, well done :)

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Thank you :), I'm glad you like it.
The Critique system seems very useful, I have picked up a lot of helpful tips all ready.

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:icondragonologystudent:
Marvolous piece of work you made. I don't think I'm patient enough to draw all the scales. X3

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:iconpcraven:
Thank you :) (it helps if you have good music to listen to) You just sort of have to zone out and pay attention at the same time, talk to someone, listen to an audio book, all these work. They do take a long time to do.

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:icondragonologystudent:
No problem at all.

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Thanks for the tip by the way.

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You're welcome :)

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:iconignitus1992:
No prob ^^

My main problem with the critique system is that it's only available to subscribers, which I don't really think is right. The whole point of dA is to post one's work so that one may receive comments and critique to improve. Making it subscriber-only kinda defeats the purpose of the site, doesn't it?

Otherwise, I think the critique thing is pretty neat, but I refuse to use it because I don't quite think it's fair.

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Well there is nothing stopping anyone writing one and just putting it in the comments, could even use the same grading system and all. :star::star::star: they even have star symbols to use :)
But I see what you mean by it not being fair, but DA must cost money to run but it would be nice if the critique system was free, it would help a lot more people.

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